Awesome intro though, i laughed.

I think the colours are really good....looks quality..

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Ezekiel 25:17

Anyway from what's going on, those that don't understand. The kid gets off work gets in ride girl is going somewhere girl whacks him in the kidny! He hits into a hologram which he is actually inside a transformer, wondering what the hell he isn't human. Then I think there is a explanation page lacking there.. girl runs out screaming he gets dropped off near his house.. Gets back in his farther's car goes out again sees the girl and one of the evil Decepticon's trys to plow her ass! Da da, Transformer there..

I think basically you tend to shade Metal/Shiny stuff alot better. That is one sexy can.. *cough* um you should probably add some perspiration to it! Not needed, but it couldn't hurt to add that and maybe some dim chalky lettering to the keyboard.

The vehicles you've colored are really what is showed here. Suggest possibly maybe really adding a sharp spectacle cut in the car headlights would be a good bonus to action in movement.

I think the girl's coloring is really nice in the face expressions carried in emotions.

I think you need to add more into the effect of the hologram when he bumps through it. Needs some static/noise possibly less liquefied and more horizontal distortion zags.

The last panel there where the car on the right is slamming down. I'd like to see some white streaks/black possibly just some type of action color to the tire as it hits rather than dust kicking. It looks like it is about to burrow in the ground I want to see the tire rattle/shock you know. I want to see the feel of his air time as his force comes down..

Last thing I'll comment on you should've just carried that shadow on the middle car more outward towards us fully on the right. Possibly gave it a sharp jolted cut on the to the left more giving it that feel like it's coming down instead of probably onward colliding with me face.