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myre
Newbie

Member # 311

posted 29-01-2006 12:39 PM

I would have prefered to have had a more detailed picture to learn with but i suck at detailed pictures so what can i say. My first real try at this so be merciful lol.

The Girl with the bat

[ 04-02-2006: Message edited by: myre ]

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Nitro
Grand Member

Member # 368

posted 15-04-2006 03:35 AM

This is a good effort. You could have given the pic a bit more detail but the shading is quite good.

Keep at it!!

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Tri_kento
Super Member

Member # 194

posted 15-04-2006 07:10 AM

I agree, you could of put a little more effort into the line work. You can color a picture as much as u want, but if the line work ain't good, the drawing will be lacking. not that ur drawing is bad, it's just don't worth ,in my opinon, coloring.

But good work on coloring!

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Zankouken
Grand Member

Member # 203

posted 24-04-2006 02:05 AM

Its good Myre but your shading seems inconsistent and the lighting on her hair doesn't seem right at all.
You should concentrate less on the effects I feel.

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Nokomis
Newbie

Member # 421

posted 29-06-2006 01:43 PM

It's not so bad, for a first attempt. The hair could certainly use some improvement. What I normally do with a character that has black hair is to not use black as my base colour (as stupid as it sounds xD). Have a slightly lighter black (or dark grey? xD) and this gives you the opportunity to have more detailed shading on the hair, seeing as you can't shade black any darker

What I think you did do well is the shading on the skin. That doesn't look bad at all. I'm not particularly keen on the lineart as it's not very smooth, but that's something that will improve with practise.

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spencer macpherson
Grand Member

Member # 358

posted 10-07-2006 04:59 AM

mhmm great job

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Timmy
Junior Member

Member # 424

posted 17-07-2006 11:10 PM

i dont wan tot critizize your work but it looks like its done in windows paint

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