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Dekar
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posted 28-03-2006 01:18 AM
    
Nose COLLISION imminent!  Hi, welcome to the board. This is pretty cool, it reminds me of another game rather than NWN (Never Winter Nights) characters. It reminds me of a old SNES game like Arthur's Quest or maybe somewhat of Link and Zelda. I think it's style is well-rounded how it's done, although I don't see a resemblance to NWN at all honestly. I think mostly because I just expect more brushing or a more in depth type of thing to be done. Perhaps if you wanted to capture a romantic dream thing you could've had them with a open wideshot view. I think this would just really draw it out if you wanted that, but it's not required. I don't mind the lips can't a girl have a wet dreamy thing once and then? Looks.. uhh cute I guess the way you shoved them togeather.  The picture has a fuzzy feel to it, I think mostly it's cause there is no real definition to the color bounds. I think you would be best off adding in a real thin lines but not just a full outline like a typical cell-style to suit this better. You would want to fade the lines gently so it wouldn't be so dominate and you would be working with really precise thin lines-width to vary a bit. Also, you would probably want to erase some line areas fully on the outside where the light hits. I'm not sure if you want to actually tackle with this, but I think this will enhance it well if done. Doing this would then still allow you that fuzzy feel, but remove the haze and head daze that you get for glancing at it for a few mins. I think you need to add a slight small curve to the guys neck as it's joining his chest on the bottom left. Just a small suddel curve will break it as it meets his body and it will make his neck more solid and fluent to his chest. (appear as he is reaching to kiss her more) It has to be very tiny tho cause of his chest perspective due to position. Hair wise I'd probably like too see the full white highlights that you have on the girls hair go away with fully. Looking good, the atmosphere does do the trick if you go into it more.  [ 28-03-2006: Message edited by: Dekar ]
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I don't think the "no outlines" look does the picture much justice. That style usualy requires a much more contrasted and detailed colouring, which lacks in this picture. This one has a more cell-shaded look to it. Some smooth shading are mixed but not to the extent that it can go without outlines. Just a small remark, all in all it looks good 
posted 24-03-2006 07:38 PM
