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Yuki H.
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Member # 199

posted 17-02-2004 05:18 PM

I just started on presedent's day and I drew alot of pictures so far but my bro. notices that I draw this same girl alot but my latest creation is a girl called Jayde{Jade}
she is a teenage teacher who is apart of a klan called tempouin and she hids her identity from the students and teachers. the only person in that school who knows is a long time friend who is a half breed demon that gets in alot of trouble because she becomes annoyed easily and hurt alot of people so =, what do you think about it?

[ 17-02-2004: Message edited by: Yuki H. ]

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kyoto
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Member # 201

posted 21-02-2004 12:14 AM

I like it u r a very good writer and i have a good feeling in da end of your story it may be sad well is it? and what is it really about anyway I know that isn't the whole thing. I like sad things HeHeHeHeHe.

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Bugsy
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Member # 9

posted 21-02-2004 12:36 AM

*moves the topic here*

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Yuki H.
Grand Member

Member # 199

posted 21-02-2004 08:53 PM

what bugsy?i dont get what your sayn'
and Kyoto yes the story is sad full of deaths killing. but don't seem so bad if u read it right. I like sad things as much a u. seriously i like sad things and things that leave u hanging. my friend's cousin beats her up if she doesn't hear da story never knew it was that good. its utterly amusing that she gets beatin' up!

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Tri_kento
Super Member

Member # 194

posted 22-02-2004 04:30 PM

story sounds great but i'd like to see these pics of the girl u keep on drawing. ^_^! later

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Bomu
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posted 24-02-2004 11:50 AM

quote:
Originally posted by Bugsy:
*moves the topic here*

The topic was posted in a different forum catagory- Bugsy moved it to "Writtings and Misc Creations" as you're taking about your story. (Sorry to answer for you Bugsy!)

Yuki, I'm not sure about having a teenage teacher, if she's a school teacher that is. After finishing school, college and teacher training courses, she'd have to be at least in her 20s! Although stories never have to be conventional and make perfect sence, it's still good to introduce some facts into the fiction

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Bugsy
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Member # 9

posted 24-02-2004 03:03 PM

lol no problem bomu

I'll have to be less cryptic at times

Anyway, yeah a teenage teacher doesn't really help your story's credibility. I'd say at least 22 or 23, which is in fact still quite young for a teacher.

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 25-02-2004 11:05 PM

Think u could scan theses pics so we could see them ?

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Yuki H.
Grand Member

Member # 199

posted 25-02-2004 11:49 PM

i'm still waiting 4 a scanner I could use my brother's but he doesn't have a floppy drive on his laptop if he did I could work on my artwork more and not go through the stress of asking him every once in a blue moon

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Yuki H.
Grand Member

Member # 199

posted 25-02-2004 11:54 PM

I feel like a retard from the teenage teacher thing but i had a 5th grade teacher who was 24 she hated me and made me miserable if u think she was pretty no she looked 45 so sad. let me laugh out my retarded feeling then wonder why I sometimes say retarded things.

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 25-02-2004 11:54 PM

mmm i got it me and u will rob a office depo and we can split loot 50/50 hehe.

^_^!

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Yuki H.
Grand Member

Member # 199

posted 25-02-2004 11:58 PM

quote:
Originally posted by Tri_kento:
mmm i got it me and u will rob a office depo and we can split loot 50/50 hehe.
^_^!

HeHeHe thats a good idea just hope I don't get caught! j/k lol

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Yuki H.
Grand Member

Member # 199

posted 26-02-2004 12:09 AM

quote:
Originally posted by Yuki H.:

HeHeHe thats a good idea just hope I don't get caught! j/k lol (i would never do that)

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 26-02-2004 04:04 AM

o i don't know when it comes to Office depo and i have garbage can well there may be some broken glass hehe ^_^!

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Yuki H.
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Member # 199

posted 26-02-2004 11:43 PM

so your saying that you would..... ouch that will hurt!

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kyoto
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Member # 201

posted 27-02-2004 12:14 AM

you people r funny i bet that u guys would b caught if you come there directly after office depot is closed so wait real real late lol

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 27-02-2004 01:15 AM

Psst.... pssst wanna know a secret.... I WAS JOKING

hehe but i think i am going to buy a scanner soon they have this sale at walmart $89candian for and HP Scanner good enough for know i spos

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Yuki H.
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Member # 199

posted 27-02-2004 06:44 PM

we know u were kidding we were just playing along but if you actually ment that I would b terrified! im at school

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Yuki H.
Grand Member

Member # 199

posted 27-02-2004 08:19 PM

Your lucky in n.y. nothing is good 4 less if it is it would break a few days after u get it. crappy stuff!

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Tri_kento
Super Member

Member # 194

posted 28-02-2004 04:35 AM

Sry to hear that i give u my deepest regauds that getting deals means getting junk :P

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Yuki H.
Grand Member

Member # 199

posted 28-02-2004 10:50 PM

I guess someone feel my pain a little.

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