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<MIKE B>
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posted 03-03-2002 05:29 PM       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
THIS MESSAGE IS MOSTLY FOR BOMU BUT IF ANYONE ELSE HAS AN IDEA YOU CAN REPLY TOO
I NEED A STORY MANGA ANIME STYLE WITH Y'KNOW SAMURAIS, PLOT TO DESTROY THE WORLD, SWORD FIGHTS, ULTIMATE HERO, HUGE LANDS FANTASY SORT OF THING. SO ANYONE WITH AN IDEA I NEED ONE! IV,E SEEN HOW SOME OF YOU GUYS CAN DRAW!WOW!THANKS

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Bomu
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posted 03-03-2002 10:13 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Samurais, and warriors, fighters and heros, swords and fantasy.. and castles! Hmmmm

Ok, well first off, what do you need a story for? Do you plan to illustrate it or something? Do you want an original story made, or to be directed towards an existing one.. Or is it just a case of wanting ideas to write your own??

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MIKE B
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posted 04-03-2002 08:56 PM     Profile for MIKE B   Author's Homepage   Email MIKE B     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
HEY BOMU
WELL IF I GET A REALLY GOOD STORY IT WILL GIVE ME THINGS TOTHINK ABOUT. I'LL GET PICTURES IN MY HEAD WHAT STUFF L LOOK LIKE.
IF ITS GOOD AND THE SKETCHES I DO LOOK GOOD I MIGHT EVEN ILLUSTRATE IT FULLY! I MAY NEED SOME HELP THOUGH IT'S KINDA BEEN MY AMBISION SINCE I WAS ABOUT EIGHT.

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Bomu
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posted 04-03-2002 11:06 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I see, so you want a story to check out, to give you inspiration, right?
Unfortuanetly I don't read books much, but why not check out some movies such as Lone Wolf and Cub? It's about a skillful Ronin warrior and his son who's seem to spend their entier lives avoiding assassination attemps from rival clans etc! Of couse there's more to it than that, but it's a really cool story and there's a comic of it too.. And if you're looking into comics, check out Blade of The Imortal. Never read it, but told it's a fantastic samurai slash-em-up

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 05-03-2002 02:13 AM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
From reading your first post I think you can make a story of your own, 'couse it seams that you allready know in wich direction the story should go.

So ask yourself some easy Questions

where should it take place:

Well you want Samurai's and Sword Fight so I guess Feudal Japan could do it (and Japan is big enough for the Huge Land Part ).
but to be more in detail think about the locations
snowy mountains, old rainy Forest, small towns, Big City's whit all its crime, great palace where some festivals take place.

Ok next question.

you want an Ultimate Hero so who is he and waht makes him the ultimate:

is he/she a skillfull swordmaster, a magican
,maybe a small boy who saw once how a demon can be killed.
Also don't forget the motivation of them.

normally when you start anwsering questions like this more will come and it flows quite easly.

I actully came up whit something by writing this.

here we go.

It plays in the old japan during some clanwars (dunno wich period).
while the country side is turned to red by the blood and fire off burning courpse's, hasn't the city's changed a lot.
Its still the same trade and crime as ever.
The only thing that its different is that a religiones group (could be christians) declared they found a way to get rid of all the suffering in the world.

Well our hero is a young but skillfull Necromancer, living in the redlight district of the city and while most of th people in the city think that the group is totaly crazy but he knows it better and because he really likes his life of sex, drugs and rock'n roll (ok sex sake and kabuki) he travels after them to kill the priests one by one.

ok enough but by re reading it I have alot questions allready, like how became the hero a necromancer (flashback time ),are the priest really powerfull enough to turn the world into a peacefull place or are they makeing it just in to a quiet place (I mean death quiet like ).
are there other wich travel with the hero to help him and wil the hero ever have a own name.

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<MIKE B>
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posted 06-03-2002 06:26 PM       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
OK I got the characters and places sussed but what about a plot thats what I want most your'e one isn't bad but its not what I'm looking for I want a plot that has a really good character but also a evil one.
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posted 06-03-2002 11:20 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Giam, with ideas like that, you should go ahead and write your own novel!

Mike, Plot?? Don't look at me, I have enough trouble writting my own existing stuff, let alone something new >_<
Why not just think of films you like then take different aspects and influences from them to create something new... I'm sure that's what most writters do.

btw, you might alread know this, but to post with your log in name (without the < and > and to show your avatar and user details), ya need to log in before you post

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 20-03-2002 11:05 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hm writing a story, didn't wrote anything since school but yeah maby I give it a shoot.

well I guess for a plot I thing you allready found a good way to trick as giving you one
so we see how this thing is turning out.

For the good/bad one, uhm I personally think its like this.

Normaly every person in a story is neutral to good.
Except the one who got the story focus he/she is the hero(even if it is a bad guy).
So when everyone presume's that all are good, how do we get a bad guy.
It's easy we have to tell the audience he is (think about darth vader how we know he is bad couse he leads a attack against a small underpowered group wich are only trying to defend their beautyfull princess and that in the first minutes of the film).

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