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Topic: NEW STORY
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G.i.A.m.
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posted 05-03-2002 02:13 AM
From reading your first post I think you can make a story of your own, 'couse it seams that you allready know in wich direction the story should go.So ask yourself some easy Questions where should it take place: Well you want Samurai's and Sword Fight so I guess Feudal Japan could do it (and Japan is big enough for the Huge Land Part ). but to be more in detail think about the locations snowy mountains, old rainy Forest, small towns, Big City's whit all its crime, great palace where some festivals take place. Ok next question. you want an Ultimate Hero so who is he and waht makes him the ultimate: is he/she a skillfull swordmaster, a magican ,maybe a small boy who saw once how a demon can be killed. Also don't forget the motivation of them. normally when you start anwsering questions like this more will come and it flows quite easly. I actully came up whit something by writing this. here we go. It plays in the old japan during some clanwars (dunno wich period). while the country side is turned to red by the blood and fire off burning courpse's, hasn't the city's changed a lot. Its still the same trade and crime as ever. The only thing that its different is that a religiones group (could be christians) declared they found a way to get rid of all the suffering in the world. Well our hero is a young but skillfull Necromancer, living in the redlight district of the city and while most of th people in the city think that the group is totaly crazy but he knows it better and because he really likes his life of sex, drugs and rock'n roll (ok sex sake and kabuki) he travels after them to kill the priests one by one. ok enough but by re reading it I have alot questions allready, like how became the hero a necromancer (flashback time ),are the priest really powerfull enough to turn the world into a peacefull place or are they makeing it just in to a quiet place (I mean death quiet like ). are there other wich travel with the hero to help him and wil the hero ever have a own name.
-------------------- Wer nicht vom Meister lernt, lernt nie etwas. Wer nur vom Meister lernt, lernt nie genug.
Posts: 1063 | From: Germany, Giessen | Registered: Jan 2002 | IP: Logged
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