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<MIKE B>
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posted 19-03-2002 07:23 PM       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I'll start by saying I'm in a hurry so cant be bothered to log in. i started by asking people if they had a story but this is easier. they've done this on other forums so here we go! this is how it works ill start writing a fantasy story based in old japan with like deamons and stuff and you can carry on dont go weird though do sensible stuff along the guide lines OK? lets begin!

len stepped out into the street of shouyu village he was born and raised there though nowadays the village was different it was ruled by an unseen king who called himself Bo-te long no one knew who he was but his guards were placed all around the village. the people seemed a lot less happy now locked up in thier homes or taverns drinking sake wierily and murmering of the good old days.len who's real name was Lensaka machinto sighed as he walked down to his house.


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G.i.A.m.
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posted 20-03-2002 10:35 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I guess You can count me in more or less.

so where are the guide lines?

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Wer nur vom Meister lernt, lernt nie genug.


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Bomu
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posted 21-03-2002 02:24 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I see... so an improvisational story between forum members. Could be fun

Yeah, any other guide lines? Maximum or minimum word count were're allowed to add? Can one person post consecutively?

Bo-Te means "Bow-Hand" in Japanese! He could be an ace with bow and arrow or something

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<MIKE B>
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posted 22-03-2002 08:01 PM       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Er there are some but not alot of guide cause if people just wright the story exagtly how i want it i might as well wright it myself!ok lets see um oh yeah Len finds about the ruler guy with side quests along the way (a chance for u to wright what u want) and kills him and his evil guards they are ruling to get taxes, extremley high ones off of people! anyway he finds this guy is only a sidekick of the real baddy! he has to travel through woods and mountains(more sidequests)to reach impereal city he fights the baddy on the castle roof (japanese castles have roofes) without descovering his identity as he escapes.thats about it for now so get writing! cause ill join in sometimes!
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<MIKE B>
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posted 22-03-2002 08:05 PM       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
OH YEAH! you can doillustrations and stuff if you want to that is! of places character ect out of the story!
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G.i.A.m.
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posted 25-03-2002 09:36 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hey just wanted to say that I got the next part written. I only have to translate it and than I'm gonna post it.

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Wer nicht vom Meister lernt, lernt nie etwas.

Wer nur vom Meister lernt, lernt nie genug.


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G.i.A.m.
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posted 03-04-2002 02:39 AM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Ok here it is but I want apologies for any spelling and grammar error that is in there(stuff like this clearly shows where your english has its limits).

It started getting cold.
Lensaka had the felling that it wasn't that cold when he left the shop.
But maybe it was just the hoplessly his village emmited right now.
he stopped for a moment and looked over the abbondend city while he rememberd,
the good old days of his youth.

"here in this street live was vibrating once I still remember how I played here everyday"he thought.
And for a small moment pictures flashed in front of his inner eye,
pictures of himself and friends playing warrior and pirat.
while the smell of food-stands and herbs seller's mixed in the whole
street to a special flavour.

Now no one was in the street anymore.

"I must hurry when mother isn't getting her ingredients soon I'll be in big trouble"
and so he shaked the old memories away and headed back home.

like it is was tadition lensaka lived with is parents till the day that he would have found a woman
who he wants to merry.
And after his father died he was now the one who had to protect the family and earn money,
but this actully didn't made him the man in the house. 'couse following another tradition
the houshold and finances was the realm of the woman and in this case lens mother.
And she ruled her empire righteous but with a iron fist if necessary.

Len meanwhile was just a few meter's away from home when he suddenly heard a scream coming from a small sideway.

well I thought stop here and let someone else fill this cliffhanger.

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Wer nicht vom Meister lernt, lernt nie etwas.

Wer nur vom Meister lernt, lernt nie genug.


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