Ok here it is but I want apologies for any spelling and grammar error that is in there(stuff like this clearly shows where your english has its limits).It started getting cold.
Lensaka had the felling that it wasn't that cold when he left the shop.
But maybe it was just the hoplessly his village emmited right now.
he stopped for a moment and looked over the abbondend city while he rememberd,
the good old days of his youth.
"here in this street live was vibrating once I still remember how I played here everyday"he thought.
And for a small moment pictures flashed in front of his inner eye,
pictures of himself and friends playing warrior and pirat.
while the smell of food-stands and herbs seller's mixed in the whole
street to a special flavour.
Now no one was in the street anymore.
"I must hurry when mother isn't getting her ingredients soon I'll be in big trouble"
and so he shaked the old memories away and headed back home.
like it is was tadition lensaka lived with is parents till the day that he would have found a woman
who he wants to merry.
And after his father died he was now the one who had to protect the family and earn money,
but this actully didn't made him the man in the house. 'couse following another tradition
the houshold and finances was the realm of the woman and in this case lens mother.
And she ruled her empire righteous but with a iron fist if necessary.
Len meanwhile was just a few meter's away from home when he suddenly heard a scream coming from a small sideway.
well I thought stop here and let someone else fill this cliffhanger.
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Wer nicht vom Meister lernt, lernt nie etwas.
Wer nur vom Meister lernt, lernt nie genug.