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Bio Chaos
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posted 22-09-2002 04:59 PM     Profile for Bio Chaos   Author's Homepage   Email Bio Chaos     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Just so we don't crowd the rules thread, and just so it won't be a pain in the patella looking for entries, this seperate topic is for ENTRIES ONLY!!! I will ask that you post no comments in this thread, just your characters. Hopefully one day in the near future I'll have a link posted here to a place where you can download the intro. But for now, show off what you've done. All comments are to be posted in the rules thread.

Sorry, I'm an organization nut, and I'd prefer having things divided cleanly, so I won't have to sort through a bunch of posts looking for entries.

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Bio Chaos
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posted 25-09-2002 03:31 PM     Profile for Bio Chaos   Author's Homepage   Email Bio Chaos     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
THIS IS AN EXAMPLE CONTEST ENTRY:

KAISON: THE DEMON CHILD OF DREAMS

Full Name: Kaison Saguss
Height: 5ft, 9in.
Weight: 240lbs (including the wings)
Occupation: Demon
Hobbies: Dropping hollow objects
Likes: Being tough
Dislikes: Being mocked
Favorite Food: Human Hearts
Story: Kaison Saguss, born of Zeera Saguss, and Captus “Scepter” Shikigami, led a sad life. The day he was born, Zeera turned him over to an adopted mother, who raised him until he was 7. At the age of 7, Scepter reappeared in Kaison’s life to reclaim him. Scepter took Kaison into space and the two lived together for 3 years. Scepter did little to influence Kaison, but the two still remained good friends. At the age of 10, Scepter took Kaison down to planet Venus, where his father released Koshiro, the god of shade. Koshiro attempted to kill Kaison’s father, but Kaison intervened. Koshiro took pity on Kaison, and spared Scepter, in exchange that Kaison would forever be his disciple. Kaison agreed, much to Scepter’s surprise, and Kaison became a demon. Koshiro retreated into the demon world, where he taught Kaison everything he knew. Kaison looked to Koshiro as a father, and friend, which they remained as for several millenia. While in the demon world, Kaison met the young demon Belial, with whom he became good friends. And it at this point where Kaison's jouney really begins.

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Pyro X
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posted 26-09-2002 06:06 AM     Profile for Pyro X   Email Pyro X     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Sikato

Full Name: Sikato Dojima
Hight: 5ft, 11in
Weight: 195 (with everything on)
Occupation: Genoch
Hobbies: Playin with fire
Likes: Confusing people
Dislikes: Being out witted

Story:
Sikato's Story

Sikato is a Genoch, a being of unnatural strength and skill. At the age of 14 Sikato had won a World Fighting Competition defeating over 540 skilled fighters being proclaimed a fighting champion and was given the chance to learn an element. Sikato decided he would wait on attaining the skill, and traveled home. Two years have passed since the day of the competition, and Sikato was board so he went on a walk. Several hours later on the way back he could see smoke coming from the village and rushed on. Once in the village Sikato noticed his father was nowhere to be seen. After asking around a bit he found out his father was last seen in the mines fighting a group of demons that caved in on him dieing soon after. Sikato in a frenzy traveled back to where the competition was held asking if it would still be possible to learn an element of skill. Approved he was given the choice’s of; Fire, Water, Wind, Earth, and Void. Choosing Fire he was branded on his right arm with the Flame of Rage, and was taught Pyrokinesis (the ability to control and create fire). Three more years have passed and Sikato has come to his peak in controlling the flame. Now determined to find out who sent the Demons and burned down the village Sikato has gone on a quest, a quest of pain and torment…


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Bio Chaos
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posted 02-10-2002 07:29 PM     Profile for Bio Chaos   Author's Homepage   Email Bio Chaos     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Sky: Youthful Mystery of Venus

Full Name: Sky Isaka
Height: 6" 1'
Weight: 210 lbs
Occupation: Hero and Girl Chaser
Hobbies: Chasing Girls or flying
Likes: Girls and nature
Dislikes:Fighting and the color pink
Favorite Food: Purple Grapes
Weapon of Choice: Detachable Double-Edged Partisan

Story: Sky was found and raised on planet Venus by a loving family. Sky was given the name because of his bright sky blue eyes. He was raised to be a warrior, and proved to be an excellent one. He far surpassed any of his friends, and soon became the strongest man on Venus. Nobody knew where Sky came from. or what Sky was, but it was clear that he was not a normal boy. He had a wicked tail, which he could use to thrash his enemies, and wings (not shown) with razor sharp edges on them, capable of cutting through most anything. His friends and foes both envied Sky because he was so much stronger than them, and many people actuallu hated him, calling him all sorts of cruel things. Neverthless, Sky plays the role of a kind hearted, yet slightly perverted young man, who is always up to the challenge of chasing a single girl for days (kind of like Carrot Glace from Sorcerer Hunters/Bakuretsu Hunters) even though it undoubtedly end in futility, and probably some name calling. Sky loves to run and play in the forest, and also enjoys flying through the skies of Venus using his majestic wings. He is courageous, and loves to help out, being known to always lend a helping hand. However Sky doesn't like to fight oddly enough, and tries to find ways to talk sense into his enemies before he is forced to harm them. He had no memory of his past when he was found, but he knew that he had an immense amount of power deep inside him, powers which he had no intention of exposing to the people of Venus until he deemed it absolutley necessary. But Sky's somewhat happy life on Venus, was about to change...

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Keith
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posted 03-10-2002 03:47 AM     Profile for Keith   Email Keith     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hackarotto

Full Name: Hackarotto Xentar
Age: 285
Height: 14 feet (approx)
Weight: 2,180lbs (including all metal armour/appendages)
Occupation: Mercenary
Hobbies: Cannabalism
Likes: Chaos
Dislikes: Planet Koran
Favorite Food: Blue Class Demon Brains

Hackarotto has thrived in the demon world on cannabalism, growing larger and stronger than most. His size will not allow him to attain the speed and agility shown by other demons. Hack's wings are disproportionately small for his size, he is unable to fly without any mechanical aids. His wings were later removed by Eternes.
Hack has been recruited by Eterne's to undergo various tasks. Armed with a renegade Genmoch Mecha destroyer (about the last of it's kind) Hack travels throughout the space time continuom wreaking havoc where ever his travels take him. For compensation Eterne's has promised Hack more power, as shown with the retrofitted legs, his double sided battle axe, his metal headgear (used to command the mechaniod), and various peices of armour. A combustion jet back (not illistrated) is later attached to the nerve endings where his wings were, allowing him to fly.

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Sean
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posted 11-10-2002 07:35 PM       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Here is my entry ill have the story in a few days
Xaion

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posted 12-10-2002 09:50 AM     Profile for Pyro X   Email Pyro X     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
well here is my last entry his name is
Seth (The Assassin) Greyson

Full Name: Seth Greyson
Age: 17
Height: ???
Weight: ???
Occupation: Demon Hunter
Hobbies: ???
Likes: Stealthy Creatures
Dislikes: All forms of Demons ((including himself))
Favorite Food: Cherrys
Weapon of Choice: Laser Grafted Sword


Seth, like most Genochs, was born and raised in the towers, Only sadly was born an orphin. ((You see Seth's mother died while giving birth, and his father denied him as his son for what happend)) Seth wasnt like most genochs growing up he was raised and trained by Chaos (the one and only). Both Seth and Chaos were close friends until one day why'll they were out training a large amount of shade demons appeared attacking and striking down Seth. Chaos did all he could to help his friend slashing several until they ran off. Chaos ran to Seth who was lying uncontious on the ground with a big gash on his stomach with both his blood and the blood of the demon lying next to him on his gashed stomach. Chaos not thinking to clearly panicked and wraped up Seth's wound and laft him to fend for himself. In two weeks Seth woke up in a Hospital,(but not just any hospital it was a Demon hospital,) screaming from pain and horror because he was surrounded by demons of all types soon passing out. When he awoke again only a nurse was there, (who was acctually a demon in human form) to explain why he was in this place. She said that in the battle a demon had sliced his stomach and he passed out from lack of blood, while he was uncontious Chaos had killed several demons but one in particulars blood had splatered and hit Seth causing both the bloods to mix making Seth a Shade Demon instantly getting marks on his stomach and arms. Seth in a rage couldnt believe it until lifting his arm and seeing the marks. So ashamed he loweded his head wondering why the happened to him. The Nurse explained further that some Demon Doctors would like to run some tests on him and that he would be further trained to advance his fairly primative fighting abilitys. Through the course of two years of hard work and training Seth became very skilled in the ways of the Assassin.


sorry people ill have to finish this later
chao

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Bio Chaos
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posted 16-10-2002 04:30 AM     Profile for Bio Chaos   Author's Homepage   Email Bio Chaos     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
TAIRIN: The Black Innocent

Full name: Tarin Allanuss
Height: 6ft 2in
Mutation height: 12ft 6in(it has grown taller since tarin has become taller)
Weight:175lbs
Mutation weight:500lbs
Occupation:Loner
Hobbies: Revenge
Likes: Revenge
Dislikes: Dr. Anthony Gerto
Favorite food: Mortals hearts


Tarin was born,along with many other shade demons, in the hospital at the same time as Koshiro and Sai . His mother died while giving birth, so now Tarin was all alone. So the hospital took him in and did some experiments on him for many years until something went wrong. At this time Tarin was only 10 years old and could do nothing more than to speak a simple yes or no. Tarin had lived a lonely life being tested on and had nothing to do but sit and wait for the next experiment. Now he had reached the age where they could test him to great extent so the tried a new elixir on him and something had gone horribly wrong. They tested the demon cure to see if you could cure of being a demon. They strapped Tarin down and poured the elixer into his mouth and he went silent. They presumed he had died and tossed the experiment and then dumped him into the surrounding are somewhere. Tarin laid unconscious for several days before suddenly and surprisingly waking up. He had found that he had been sleeping for days and was still dead tired. But then something from deep inside triggered a transformation. He lay screaming clutching his chest until something emerged not from inside but from out engulfing his body in black tangles of something that was definitely neither demon or human. Then emerging from the tangles came a screaming beast with fangs and claws and stood about 10ft tall the claws themselves were 1ft in length and his fangs each 1/2 a foot. The beast turned to the hospital and tore his way into it. He seemed to be looking for something or someone. Then he found it." you, look what you've done to me” said the monster,” I hope you are happy because you are about to die.” With that the demon reared up but just before he could strike Tarin emerged again looking helpless. The men were about to seize him when he took off with all of his strength screaming down the corridors narrowly avoiding the guards. It was when he was at the bottom when it happened again. He mutated and killed 3 guards the others left ran but it wasn't fast enough the monster ran and squashed the remaining guards against the hospital wall. Again the young boy emerged from the mass of tangles and feeling helpless grabbed the guards sword and ran. He noticed about halfway into the wilderness that no one followed him. So he found the nearest cave and camped for the night. What he didn't know though was that he would have a visitor while he would be sleeping. He slept like a baby but then it came the giant spider back to its home it stood perplexed but then took Tarin and wove him into his web and saved him for breakfast. When Tarin awoke he stood entangled in the spiders web unable to move. He then came face to face with the biggest thing he had ever seen” no stay away,” he shouted. But the spider ignored his cries and came in for the kill until it happened again. Tearing free from the web the monster jumped onto the spider and tore him limb from limb. Then he went back to the helpless boy again and stood in the icky goo of the spider he had destroyed. He looked at his hands and fainted. Tarin is now 18 years old and has since learned to control his monster form. Even though sometimes his anger is too great and he loses control and tears everything apart in the area. Tarin has kept the sword from the guard and chopped it in half and bent it in the fire. He now has two katanas and has also made 10 special throwing discs from the spikes on the ground. He has yet to get revenge on the doctor that ruined his life but he will and it wont be pretty.....


(An entry from someone else without reliable internet service. Thanks Gelf234)

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Bio Chaos
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posted 27-10-2002 08:47 PM     Profile for Bio Chaos   Author's Homepage   Email Bio Chaos     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Another entry from a gentelman, given to me.

Saruka: The Dark Heroine

Full Name: Saruka Millia
Height: 5ft, 9in.
Weight: 215lbs (Including the Wings)
Occupation: Hunter
Hobbies: Catching Criminals
Likes: Protecting Things
Dislikes: Darkness
Favorite Food: Apples
Story: Saruka is an odd coincidence. She was a demon born to the world of light. Her father, a demon come to wreak havoc, and her mother a beautiful innocent. For years Saruka had dwelled in the light of humanity, never questioning her gifts. Never understanding who and what she was. Until one dread hour, when a portal tore open, and a hungry demon stepped out to feast upon whatever banquet was closest. She witnessed a terrible beast plunge its clawed fingers deep within her mother’s breast, and tear out the blood seed, which gave her life. Saruka stared blindly as the warm vessels dripped lugubriously from the monster’s gleaming fangs. Her own heart began to break, as the beast began to eye her as a second course. Her instincts flailed wildly, as ran to hearth an retrieved an old sword from the mantle. Using the blade, Saruka ran it through the creature pinning him to the wall with a blood curdling shriek. His body oozed with a thick black pus, his mouth wailed and gargled in blood filled agony. It writhed in utter pain for a good hour before it perished, all the while Saruka’s tears filled the empty hole in her mother’s breast.

Now many centuries later, Saruka has established her self on the planet Koran. Traveling to other worlds and dimensions, and capturing criminals, to bring them to justice. Her trustworthy blade, draped gracefully by her side, she seeks to find the power to enter, and ravage the demon world, to bring it to justice. For the love that was taken from her, she would have her vengeance.

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quote:
Originally posted by Keith:
Hackarotto

Full Name: Hackarotto Xentar
Age: 285
Height: 14 feet (approx)
Weight: 2,180lbs (including all metal armour/appendages)
Occupation: Mercenary
Hobbies: Cannabalism
Likes: Chaos
Dislikes: Planet Koran
Favorite Food: Blue Class Demon Brains

Hackarotto has thrived in the demon world on cannabalism, growing larger and stronger than most. His size will not allow him to attain the speed and agility shown by other demons. Hack's wings are disproportionately small for his size, he is unable to fly without any mechanical aids. His wings were later removed by Eternes.
Hack has been recruited by Eterne's to undergo various tasks. Armed with a renegade Genmoch Mecha destroyer (about the last of it's kind) Hack travels throughout the space time continuom wreaking havoc where ever his travels take him. For compensation Eterne's has promised Hack more power, as shown with the retrofitted legs, his double sided battle axe, his metal headgear (used to command the mechaniod), and various peices of armour. A combustion jet back (not illistrated) is later attached to the nerve endings where his wings were, allowing him to fly.

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