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tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 29-09-2002 02:05 PM

why am i here,why have i been sent here,in this world where evrything is upside-down,how come everything i have been told as a child never turned to be right,i try to do good but people reject me and people that do bad are always the mosted loved,i miss to understand that ,and i miss to understand why does the few people i have loved went away from me, and i miss to understand why some people ar enever punished for what they have done, and i miss to understand why do they kill ,have they never felt the loss of a love one a love one like my mother which has been killed and raped like she was just a tool and instrument or a bug you squash leaving me in this cold and bloody world whit no one left and an undefined future, each day i wonder...should i end it all ,shoudl i end this misery of mine...
Tuigi
Chaos Zero 1st

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if you think you will fail a battle before starting it ,then you have already lost.
tuigi

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G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 02-10-2002 12:26 AM

Thats kinda depressing and I'm not sure if I like the message of it.

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Wer nicht vom Meister lernt, lernt nie etwas.

Wer nur vom Meister lernt, lernt nie genug.

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neo
Extreme Member

Member # 88

posted 02-10-2002 01:44 AM

A bit of creative writing. Enjoy...

Darkness and shadows. A maelstom of twisting anguish and pain threatening to drag my inner light into the choking blackness of despair which drains into my being every day i stand upon this miserable, tiny planet. A living darkness which bears all the wickedness and contempt that this life has shown to me in the endless march of years which have withered my spirit and extinguished what little hope that still lived within this meagre mortal shell. Now i wish only for the veil of death to be drawn over these tired eyes, to take away the pain and return me to the ignorant bliss of nothingness. Sweet release beckons to me as i pull the trigger and bring down the curtain of my existance. The show will go on without this petty actor in the divine comedy we call life...

I write for a hobby too...

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tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 02-10-2002 01:55 AM

nice,that was good i like the feel of it.
dont worry g.i.a.m i m not always that depressing in my whritings

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if you think you will fail a battle before starting it ,then you have already lost.
tuigi

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neo
Extreme Member

Member # 88

posted 02-10-2002 02:28 AM

ta m8. As i say, its my other more competent hobby.

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Bomu
Moderator

Member # 1

posted 03-10-2002 12:31 AM

Wow, that's meningful stuff. Care if I add something a little lighter into the topic?

A poem by Bomu:

I'm 19 and I'm really very lazy,
been drawing since I was a little baby

At the most I'll draw a picture a day,
but that doesn't always include anime

I find drawing all the time gets very boring,
so I relax a lot in between working

I've been drawing manga for many years,
and I'm considered good among my peers,
it's been the same story for years and years.

^o^

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Organic Metal

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neo
Extreme Member

Member # 88

posted 03-10-2002 01:08 AM

Nice, making ryming verses is the hardest thing to do. Sounds like it should be on a greeting card. :>

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tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 03-10-2002 11:32 AM

lol

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if you think you will fail a battle before starting it ,then you have already lost.
tuigi

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neo
Extreme Member

Member # 88

posted 05-10-2002 02:38 AM

The two assassins stood calmly admist the warehouse inferno which raged around them. Each stared deep into the others eyes, in an attempt to gain insight into the others intentions. The intense heat billowed the black leather coat they each wore. A coat that was worn by each member of the demonchild organisation. With a resounding crack one of the main beams fell, clattering away into a mountain of barrels which scattered away noisily before being pounced upon and devoured by the maelific flames.

"The general wants you dead John my boy. Nothing personal."
"The only one going to hell today is you Tyler"
"Afraid not, id miss the football too much".

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neo
Extreme Member

Member # 88

posted 05-10-2002 03:04 AM

John withdrew his slender knife from its sheath and span it neatly in his right hand twice before lowering his stance and preparing for battle. The fire burned brightly in the arc of the blade. A reflection which caused the weapon to sparkle, as though empowered by magical forces.
"Ah!, The famous knife. I allways thought it would be bigger"
"We'll see how smug you are when its in your throat"
"This was more than a job for you wasnt it John"
With a resounding ring of steel Tyler withdrew his black Katana in an arc of silver light. As the blade travelled through the air, a shimmering haze followed its movement. Tyler dragged the sword along the ground as glittering sparks burst forth. The grind of steel rose above the fiery cacophany which surrounded them. Tyler held the sword sidelong before him and leaned deeper into his stance with a murderous look in his eyes.
"Now John boy, you die..."
"Try to stay alive long enough for me to enjoy myself Tyler"
"Ill try not to bore you too much"

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tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 05-10-2002 04:02 AM

nice
i can really see a future for you in this.
i ll try to post somethin later

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if you think you will fail a battle before starting it ,then you have already lost.
tuigi

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neo
Extreme Member

Member # 88

posted 07-10-2002 12:49 AM

Anyone needs any help writing, just ask.

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