Well, I'm sure, that at least a few of you know, that I'm making a comic called "Demon Heart" right now. No, I'm not vouching for artwork, or for help. Instead, I come with a little idea. Demon Heart will be an animated comic blah blah blah, and just so people won't get bored waiting for the next issue to arrive, I'll have a small little comic on the side.

OK! HERE'S THE IDEA: It's gonna be an Alice in Wonderland story. Messed up, and macabre like the PC game, but not quite so demented. I want it to include a few characters from the original stories, and then a whole new set. The previous characters it will include, are the Cheshire Cat, the White Rabbit, and either the Queen of Hearts or the Mad Hatter. It'll esentially be like the Alice stories, except, a whole new story.

HERE'S WHAT I'M ASKING FOR: Ideas? Anyone got any suggestions? Got any ideas for a cruel adventure for Alice to undertake? Any ideas for story Characters? Plot? Morals? Poems? ANYTHING! Right now, I'm drawing Alice, as I have finished a picture of the Cheshire cat.

Well, I got a general idea now, of what the story is going to be overall, but I still need as many ideas as possible.

It starts out with Alice, in her quiet home, with her parents. She's older now, maybe about 18-19, so yes (ahem) she has boobies. And she's playing with her little brother, or maybe her cousin, or maybe her boyfriend. EITHER way, someone she cares about. Then suddenly, her mirror begins cracking, and an eerie red light beams in around the edges, then suddenly, it blows! Flames spew everywhere, and some tall dark creature/beast emerges and roars. Alice is knocked out, and the beast grabs her cousin/brother/boyfriend, and then leps back through the mirror. When Alice returns to conciousness, her house is aflame, and so is the entire hillside. She sees her parents far away, screaming for someone to save their daughter. Then she turns around, and the rabbit is standing in front of her. He escorts her through the mirror, and they travel back to Wonderland, except this time...I'TS PERSONAL! She'll shoot guns, trick, maim, kill, strip of her clothing, and do whatever it take to get rid of Wonderland and all the touble it's caused forever.

But I must admit that I'm not to keen about this Idea anyway.
See ripoffs (or homages if you like that better) often blow up in the wrong direction, both qualtiy and legaly wise.
So if you do something like this be carefull.

Also It seems like you want it just as a filler for your fans, who are waiting on your anim.
Maybe some light gag comic would suit this purpose better than another dramatic story.

And remember every hour you work on the comic, is a hour that your movie takes longer.

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