SturmDragoon
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posted 01-02-2004 07:07 AM
I need some help you guys. You see, I've never really liked the whole evil vampire idea, so I am writing a story involving not only the line of vampires that spawn from Dracula, and a new line stemming from a sire named Vincent Gaiya La Malkier. This new line of vamps, the pure-blooded anyway, do not need fear sunlight, holy water, crosses, but only beheading. Vincent is the elder brother to Dracula, and has a different set of morals. He taught his descendants not to drink of humans, general no-nos. He left his house, for solitude and to enjoy life. About the fourth generation after his leaving, one of Vincent's descendants met the Dark Lord Dracula. This Vampire was pushed to feed on humans, which began to change the vampires of La Malkier into the stereotyped vampires of today. After several generations had passed, news reached Vincent, who returned to exterminate the tainted vampires of his line. Thats as far as I've gotten so far... If you guys want to criticize, help out, character designs, I'm open to anything. But I hope to turn this into a manga (online) and I need some more of the story.
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