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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 29-06-2004 03:52 PM

I'm baaaack. With some artwork.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/8465787/ - inspired by FHM babe Elsa Pataki
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/8465755/ - couple making out.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/8465659/ - experimentation with noses and hair

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 30-06-2004 09:25 PM

well angelo i spos i am not one to speak since i only posted 1 crappy pic for whole time of me being here but it seems with your drawings that u don't clean them up enouhe like when i look at the arms of the couple makeing out u can see little ticks from the pencile the form into 1 long tick kinda thing it looks like a ruff draft(i don't mean this to be insulting) i think u got real talant u just need to spend more time cleaning up a picture before u slap into the scanner and post it. or if u do go on psp and darken the lines a little so it can be seen and delete the smudges that of cloud everthing. but once agian i see real talent i think u should try to make a ruff copy then get a fresh page and try to make a good copy this would really improve the image. good work none the less.

[ 30-06-2004: Message edited by: Tri_kento ]

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Zankouken
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Member # 203

posted 03-07-2004 12:51 AM

Chill Tri they are just random sketches.
I think in general the shoulders seema bit wide and the mans nose in the experimentation doesnt look right. I like the way you do your hair though very cool.

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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 03-07-2004 05:41 PM

Zan - about the hair. A friend of mine at uni helped me out with that (hence the reason it doesn't look as shit as usual). Yeah, i kinda had my doubts about the noses in the experimentation piece. If anyone's got any advice on that, it would help loads. Please.

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Tri_kento
Super Member

Member # 194

posted 03-07-2004 07:32 PM

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Originally posted by Zankouken:
Chill Tri they are just random sketches.

? i was just giving an opinion and i don't like giving 2 word comments about peoples drawings "even if there randome sketches" if they put the time to draw and scan them in i think i can give up 2 mins to type out a respectful comment. from my persnol point of view i would much rather get a least something more then it looks good" for a comment the thing about forms are u can persnalize your opinion to make it interesting and so other don't bore them selves to death reading the reviews. so don't tell me to chill because am a fire that can't be extinguished.

(opps looks like i typed another one)
ps. no way shape or form was this comment meant to insult or try and argavate any one it was a vocied opinion. ^_^

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Zankouken
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Member # 203

posted 04-07-2004 01:12 AM

@ Tri, I meant in the sense they are only sketches, I dont know many people who ink or clean up an image to post as a sketch.

@ Angelo, I dont know much about drawing noses myself but I'm currently watching Naruto and when a nose is shown at angles similar to the ones in your pic they only shade it. As in they dont draw any lines just where it catches the light/casts a shadow .

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Bomu
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Member # 1

posted 19-07-2004 10:25 AM

I think my fav is the Happy Families pic. I dont have any major probs with the noses- the faces are the best parts of all the pics

but consider making the husband's legs longer to equal out the proportions more. Or you could make the arms and jacket shorter.. Keep it up

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