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TK
Grand Member

Member # 370

posted 10-10-2005 09:59 PM

i was wondering if this pic is worth cging the hair on the left side went wrong and she has a giant shoulder? but its not bad

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Cloud
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Member # 276

posted 10-10-2005 11:02 PM

Wow... the right side of the hair... that's amazing... the only thing I would suggest is make the neck in-line with the body, and downsize her head by one size, I like drawing ppls with big heads.

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 11-10-2005 01:06 AM

Wow looks like u put alot of time in this one. well at the hair for sure.

And for shoulders to big? i don't think so i think u missed portioned the arms and made the apperance of to wide of shoulders, and the chest part, (not the boobs but the over all chest, rib cage and all) is to slim .. not that u want to get over board on it. but i'd say just slime the arms a little and widen the chest out,.. the boobs look a little odd to.. but then agian am loner so am no real expert on perfect boobs....

YOu might also want to move the nose a little more to the middle of the face, it seems to favor left a little.

but good go! hair looks like u put alot of effort in. good work!

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TK
Grand Member

Member # 370

posted 11-10-2005 04:02 PM

lol i modelled this picture on my girlfriend, im sure she will be delighted to find out her boobs are too small!

thanx for the advice though

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spencer macpherson
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Member # 358

posted 19-10-2005 05:01 AM

its grate

but the left cheach becide the hair peace is alittle puffie if you ask me. anyway you should rilly erace the pencil lines.

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TK
Grand Member

Member # 370

posted 19-10-2005 02:59 PM

That was ages ago its all been fixed and its in works in progress so the pencil lines were going to be rubbed out eventualy

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