Much better, and neater! This was the same sketch/ same paper as the previous, but without as much muck and messy lines. The scan was also cleaned up in PS, which I do 'coz A I'm a perfectionist, B it makes the line art a little easer to flat, C it looks a little sharper and D, would look a little better in print. The main change was probably the tendril thingies, they look a better now