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Angelo
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posted 18-07-2004 12:28 AM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
http://www.deviantart.com/view/8980608/
just a larger scale redraw of a previous picture.

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Bomu
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posted 19-07-2004 10:33 AM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I hate to say it, but I prefer the first version! The guy's pose was better- with the hand on the shoulder. and the girl didn't look so tired. What do you think?

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Angelo
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posted 19-07-2004 03:14 PM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hehe really? I thought this was an improved version. Lol I wouldn't worry about criticising it. Does she look tired in this one? I was trying to make it so her eyes were partly closed. Must have screwed up on that part.

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